The bachelorette party of my best friend was really nice. It was on Saturday, February 7th, 2015, I went with my cousin and other friends. We could enjoy the different activities that did do this day. Also in this party, I could see my old friends of high school, we enjoyed it a lot of. also we talked about our life, and our plans that we have actually, and all the things that we did during 4 years ago that we didn't see. We ate pizza and drank Vodka, Tequila and soda, we were very happy because, we could to drink a toast for the next wedding of our friend. My best friend that was the bachelorette party she looked happy with all, and she said us that she enjoyed our attendance, and all the things that we had. The last saturday was a nice and beauty day with all my old friends, I really enjoyed it a lot of. Well, that's all and it was all that I did the last saturday.
Thanks!
By Norma Estrada Mendoza
Norma,
ResponderEliminarI really loved your comment, because I could see you enjoyed a lot brig with old Frieda and having fun with all the special people in your life.
It is great to see your writing, because I good to see you can express well your ideas.
I will ask you to check all your writing and pay attention to all the possible grammar aspects and also the use of commas and full stops, and if you find mistakes, correct them.
Keep going you're doing it well!